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the_river_daughter
07-04-2004, 12:17 AM
Ok i dont put much of my poetry online, but i found out today an old friend of mine from college is very ill in hospital due to drugs. She always was a wild one, and i used to go right along with her - i calmed down, she didnt. She's in intensive care right now - she should pull out. but nobody I knew was online to talk to, so this is how i expressed the way i feel.

The High Life

I know a girl
Lives for the high life,
the alcoholics' haze,
peaceful minds and starshot eyes,
folowing white lines on a silent page.

I know her well,
traveller for tomorrow feeling
so like myself,
rolled up our sleeves together,
tripped societies' sodden creases,
slowly falling under the weather.

now I know a girl,
walks the smoke charred pathways,
snowflakes falling on her mind,
i sit and through the window i'm staring,
remembering my innocence,
dreaming and leaving my soul behind.

Claire
07-04-2004, 12:29 AM
Thats lovely:)


I've had many friends fall foul of drugs and alcohol:( Its so scary to watch when you can see disaster coming but they refuse to acknowledge it:(

I hope she's ok Lindsey...

My thoughts are with you... Big Hugs...Love Clairexxxx


My msn addy is: claire@haightashbury.zzn.com

borut16
07-04-2004, 12:45 PM
Hey,
that's written very lovely, and I really hope she's doing better soon...

Drugs get abused so fast...
I really hope she gets to feel better soon, I don't know what else to say.

Lots of happiness,
Borut

RainbowLovinHippy
07-04-2004, 01:11 PM
That's awesome hun. :) I wish peace and healing to your friend.

emilie
07-04-2004, 06:35 PM
Wow, that's such a beautiful poem. Positive vibes to your friend, I hope everything works out okie for her *hugs*

Fleassy
07-05-2004, 12:55 PM
That was one of my fave poems ive seen on the forums. Its beautiful writen for a beautiful reason.

Love to you and hope and love for you friend.
Xoxoxox

Fractual_
07-05-2004, 07:48 PM
nice!!!!!!!!

Mercy
07-09-2004, 12:41 AM
That is fantastic. Wow. You should post more poetry, that was beautiful. I hope your friend is ok...drugs are a messy thing to get into...its a horrible thing to have to learn through the mistakes of your friends.
Hope you're ok :)
Rosie x