A Question and a Poem....

[Claire]

Since the literary forum isnt about now, is this for poetry too?

Uk Arts Craft and Poetry Forum:p

Anyway heres a sloppy one from me:)







Friendship’s Glow



I lay…


As the evening fades


And the earth becomes still,


The day’s masquerades


Release through the night until,


The calm reflection creeps true


And I remember the feeling… the glow


The warmth of you.

[borut16]

Great write! :)

Especially I like these two lines:
The day’s masquerades


Release through the night

They say so much, especially the first line; the day's masquerades. I might just missunderstand it completelly but as Spider (or whatever his username is) once said:
'The purpose of poetry is to express something to someone, and all translation is equaly as valid.'
And I agree with it.

I like the flow, too. It reminds me of night lots, so calm in some way...

Fabulous write!




I believe Dandy miss Pandy, whatever as long as she's not all sandy, doesn't mind you sharing poetry here, as it's art.
But I don't know as I'm not Dandy miss Pandy. http://www.hipforums.com/forums/images/smilies/rolleyes.gif

Love,
Borut

[Spyder]

i just found this waay back in the archive and i've dug it out, because not only do i feel that this forum needs more literature

but i've just read the poem, and its really sweet claire, its well good!

[Peace-Phoenix]

Thats really lovely:) This forum could be for poetry, but I don't see any reason not to post them on the main board either. Whatever floats peoples boats I guess....

[Hippie_Girl]

I like it... Made me smile :)