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SoFarAway
12-31-2005, 09:20 AM
Dragging this plow
I keep dragging this plow
through the earth's plates
To let go is to give in
and I always said I've make my own
My own

I built the walls that surround this mountain
and I hide there deep within
Plotting, planning, looking ahead,
methods of attack and brainstorming my madness
to unleash upon the likes of man

The heaven's shall fall from the thunderous sound
the governments crushed by the opposing iron fist

Man shall be set free

Keramptha
12-31-2005, 03:04 PM
it's really good, i kept getting drwan to this till i finally read it. It's so god, the plough...saying that our body is the plough that that sows seeds, and reaps the earth... its really a wonderful idea. theres alot of anger and energy in it.. use it well !!

SoFarAway
01-06-2006, 07:19 AM
Thanks, I kinda forgot I wrote this, but I think it's going to become a song ... heh :)

sylvanlightning
01-06-2006, 07:28 AM
Man shall be set free

Hey now!

Ok, lets here the rhythm...
sounds great so far.

SoFarAway
01-08-2006, 03:49 AM
Don't worry when I get my website up with my writing and music it'll be in my signature. Then you can hear it.