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standingdeer
12-28-2005, 07:33 PM
Nostalgia


Constant is the sound of the flute
player
It reminds me
of slight variations of my child hood

boy
playing in the forest


I once found a small blue bird
its eyes closed
nestled within a crevice of a tree
sleeping eternally
it imparted magic
beauty of a still memory

Nostalgic is the sound of the flute
player

I shake this day dream
away


standingdeer

OceanStar
12-28-2005, 08:39 PM
Oh I just loved this. Especially the lines 'sleeping eternally, it imparted magic' Really nice imagery and a great energy in this poem.

Imagine17
12-28-2005, 08:43 PM
I once found a small blue bird
its eyes closed
nestled within a crevice of a tree
sleeping eternally
it imparted magic
beauty of a still memory

I agree, just an amazing poem. This was my favorite part.