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ripple23
12-22-2005, 08:24 PM
It’s just that you reminded me
Of a river and a stream
holding hands
laughter from some drowned place
in the sea

Your body,
like a giant sun scattered with lakes
eyes that everywhere spread
the perfect
rhythm of your glace

I slept beyond the mythology of the desert
and heard,
where its shadows begin
an angel’s gray harp strings
whispering of a few things
lounging in your soul


and I might have come with the intention of the forests
Waiting for years
to drink from your breath
only to release a cool wind below the mountains
To watch you
spin a blanket and keep warm.

GypsyPriestess
12-24-2005, 02:39 AM
:H :cool: ;)

paix
12-24-2005, 04:37 AM
wow, I love it, especially the last bit

truly lovley, whoever you wrote it about is very lucky :0)

Bhaskar
12-24-2005, 06:02 PM
Thats simply magical imagery. Brilliant. Pure inspiration dripping from every line.

*electrica*
12-25-2005, 08:22 AM
It's so wow. I love the imagery and it makes me feel all nice and warm.

sylvanlightning
12-27-2005, 02:17 AM
How inspiring, excellent work.

sunshine'sbutterfly
12-27-2005, 04:58 PM
it's beautiful. i could see everything as i was reading it!

ripple23
12-28-2005, 05:59 PM
thanks everyone