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GypsyPriestess
11-23-2005, 05:51 AM
A single tear
rolls down my cheek-
it's all I dare to cry.
A single moan
escapes my lips-
a lost and lonesome sigh.
A single thought
runs through my mind-
it's the only thing I know.
A single love
I've had in my life-
and god, I miss him so.
marquis_de_odde
11-23-2005, 06:11 AM
I've read your series of poems and all of them are wrought with emotion, I liked this one because it's simplicity says so much,hope everything works out for you.
GypsyPriestess
11-23-2005, 06:48 AM
Thank you. I think I'll always miss him, but like all things, time has healed a lot of the rawness of it.
solaris
11-24-2005, 05:33 AM
thats really good I wish I could get somthing down one paper like that. I can think of stuff all the time but when I try to write it down poof its gone.
sylvanlightning
11-24-2005, 04:28 PM
Beautiful, these heartfelt feelings
have such a powerful flow....
expressed so well.
GypsyPriestess
11-25-2005, 05:34 AM
Thank you
sitareric
11-25-2005, 01:03 PM
Thats really beautiful, it gives me feelings of memories.... Like Woods, the purity of the seasons in the woods... mmm!
Corvuspirit
11-25-2005, 07:54 PM
the flow of this ditty is excellent...rolls off the tongue. thanks for sharing.
~corvuspirit
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