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ROBERT DAVIDSON
11-17-2005, 07:51 AM
SHE STOOD IN A SHADOWED DOORWAY

by Robert Davidson

She stood in a shadowed doorway
Awaiting the appointed time of delight
Eyes mocking love as
Lips of lust gleam in a moon-blanched night.

She stood in a shadowed doorway
When I shattered the dark with a light
Claiming a fierce kiss on
The porcelain pallor of a face so white.

She stood in a shadowed doorway
The touch of her body against mine stuns
As our sexes meet
Vaster than explosions of burst suns.

Our lone paths cross, then are blown apart forever
As I got what I wanted, and she her cash did recover.
The scowl of pleasure's lips now scorn me ever
Point down to the pit, mocking this sated lover.

She stood in a shadowed doorway
Her look of reproach unnerves, conceives
A cool challenge while
My lust blew away like dead winter leaves.

gdhmomchild
11-17-2005, 08:26 AM
Very well written, well told. Ty.

Keramptha
11-17-2005, 05:00 PM
thats impressive... its kind of cold and callous, with this wired contrast of colour of real living pulsating life force.... its really good in that respect. I can see how the shadowed doorway is an example of that contrast...It makes us think of an empty dark space and then underneath it is this luscious living creature. i loved the contrast...[obviously!] thanks for sharing!