some are fake

[floyd4peace]

Dead skys dwelling
with incomplete air
all zombies around you
looking quite fair
with false intentions
never apparant
anyone's guess
as to what keeps them coherent
possibly conformity
above all possibility
large group coherency
creates infallibility
and dead is their mind
which never began thinking
only took up time
and much attending
so go to hell! they will
and never again will they kill
the thoughtfull ones
who had attained so much

[Keramptha]

thats profound. i cant think [lol] of another way to describe it...it covers so many things woithout having to spell them out...thanks for sharing.... i love this layered, maddened , poetic outburst... its very daunting and effective. very very very

[floyd4peace]

why thank you very much i really appreciate the compliment.....i hate my spelling......anyways yeah thanks a bunch! http://www.hipforums.com/forums/images/smilies/smile.gif