something that occured to me at twighlight [Archive]

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Spyder

11-16-2005, 06:10 PM

Day flees in the twilight,

over hillsides

ridden with roman suicides

far to proud to live on.

Edit: Cheers TrippinBTM for knoticing!

Billie Spears

11-16-2005, 08:23 PM

Simply beautiful...sometimes the fewer words the moe profound. Like a simple I love you, or thank you, or twilight

Keramptha

11-17-2005, 05:12 PM

thats a clever idea. its like saying that sunset was so magnificent it kills itself so that it wont stay to be....i dont know taken for granted!!

Spyder

11-17-2005, 05:24 PM

thats a clever idea. its like saying that sunset was so magnificent it kills itself so that it wont stay to be....i dont know taken for granted!!
ooh i do like the way you phrased that! :>

TrippinBTM

11-17-2005, 06:13 PM

spelling threw me off, i was thinking, what to fleas have to do with this? haha.

Anyways, once my brain kicked into gear, it made sense and the beauty shone through. I like the simplicity which holds so much meaning. Nicely done.

Spyder

11-17-2005, 08:00 PM

titing hell. what a retard i am, i didnt knotice that!