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GypsyPriestess
11-16-2005, 01:11 PM
Rage

Rage leaves me like a knife

wrenched cruelly from a wound

it breaks the dam of self-control

and leaves my bleeding soul.

And when the rage passes,

when done, it leaves me spent

with a languor all pervading,

fury a memory.

sylvanlightning
11-19-2005, 05:45 AM
What a powerful last line...
great, bring it up,
for no release is possible
without going through it.