lost in thought

[Tye_DyeBrain]

winds whisper change but the direction dissipates
leafs bury each other softly until footsteps crack their collective backs
In some sort of accidental ploy; emotionless yet connected
like the stars, tacked up by fishing wire, their invisible back bone
loosened like two lips about to kiss, while they glow inside
dust gathers to open ladders that end abruptly; whispers something closely
Into ears silenced by truth compelled by lies
seeping into cracks of skin, vacuumed in sponge like tendencies
left behind but not lost, just searching in Valhalla, downed in drama
while fingers grip the search, the comfort of perfection in the shape of curves
I swallow the burning sky, breathing the same tides as you
rolling over waves, a separate pain only to congregate once again
undertows take hold then let go; minds discombobulate from current states
emerging with deep and thankful breathes, wading in, surviving for one more try
until calmness raptures within, exploding through voice
protruding until a surface has been reached
washed up one blessed thought, gleams off to the rocks sandy amnesties
eyes focus back to the shadows between the treetops

[fulmah]

so many good verses, loved the whole thing; had a very spiraling quality to it, the barrage of images coming without a real feeling of break worked well, I thought!

Good to see you stopping by again, always enjoy your work :)

like the stars, tacked up by fishing wire, their invisible back bone
loosened like two lips about to kiss, while they glow inside

yeah, i like that

[Tye_DyeBrain]

Thanks, its has been a very long time i've missed the forums!!...most of all the poetry :)

[sylvanlightning]

I swallow the burning sky, breathing the same tides as you
rolling over waves, a separate pain only to congregate once again
undertows take hold then let go; minds discombobulate from current states
emerging with deep and thankful breathes, wading in, surviving for one more try


I really enjoyed these meandering streams
which gather to torrential flows,
they whole work has a wealth of images,
well done.

[Keramptha]

Thats fookin A! a class!!!

it made me chuckel, i had an internal reaction and it was very good. it's cosmic, unexpected, and one wicked painting of randomness...but surely altogether makes some kind of biggerpicture in our minds....its really really good. i lved it.