Angel's Eyes

[Holp]

This is more of a song than a poem but I gon't no where else to post it and I really want to get peoples opinions on stuff I write so I can improve.

*Chorus*
Get me outta here
I wanna fly like an angel through the sky
Turning heads and floating by
Living life
Living life
So high

*verses*

I wanna live my life in peace
I wanna live under a roof of trees
Want my carpet to be ground
Want my music to be the sound of living

I don't think of people highly
I see them in a dim light
I don't know how we could change it
I just know it isn't right

Can't see through the mists of time
Try to hard you'll lose your mind
Prophets live and show the way
But ears are closed and eyes have long gone away

SO wat tips could you give me for future writings ? And any opinions would be gd.

[Holp]

Coooomooon this is the second time my stuff hasnt been commented on for improvements.