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Lozi
08-20-2005, 01:03 AM
I wish our wistful kisses
guess the time it took to cook my meal.
In half an eggtimer, Tuesday at 2
I bake my bread precisely,
in a way that one would relay to me each night when i tucked my pillow round my ears,
(to keep the cochroaches out)

Mmm,
sly dreams swizzle round my head as i slip down into illogical moon pools....
wish kisses gave a slight..

JOLT OF ANATOMY!!!

..which weirdo that kept the paces racing,
the heartened bloodstream thicker than the quick fox
streaming eyes of sickness in your face it's only 3 you silly fool
what sort of corridoor is this vein?
The footprints on the windowsill
JUMP OFF JUMP OFF!
guiltridden lurching
stomach only surging:
thorward backwoah'd/

/ghastly firecrackers biting air
and dark
dark
dark.
shadow seeping nearer ever creeping
in the deep of glad glands,
they sit waiting:
the puppet clown in a wheelchair,
bursting
waiting
waiting
cackling to screech
unexpected surprise,
no prize gained by the fearful retch in my throat
smoothest jerk that pops behind every whispered corner
haunting me like..
like..
like wobbling buildings when i'm at the top
like spaghetti that turned into worms
like the day i hugged my pet dog and it ripped out my throat.

jesikhaviolet
08-20-2005, 01:10 AM
that seems very confusing as always, and rather scary

Pirate Hippie
08-20-2005, 03:06 AM
Rock on

that is kind of confusing, but I think its only because I don't know the feelings behind it. Other wise it is pretty sweet.

Feral

JJ DIAMOND
08-20-2005, 06:25 AM
That Was Great Keep Up The Good Work Kiddo, Happy Writting

Icurus
08-20-2005, 10:30 PM
This was a good read, a kind of, "Off the top of your head" feel
to it, though I know it ment alot more to you then any one
who has and will read it, poems are like short books to me,
I must give faces to the characters, I must feel the temp.,
the story is all yours, the out come of it, as I have read it,
that!, that is mine......
Thank you for your thoughts, and sharing it with us.
Devon Knight ~