The Love of Distance

[ripple23]

I love you, Distance.

falling from the train i
skinned your knee-
how strange to be your ally.

like a fog the color of forests under
the barefeet of cities
relative to nothing
the night resembles a question
marked with your breath

a lady, dancing,
dips into you with every step
and with every step
lets go

[soulrebel51]

i really liked those first three lines but lost interest when the black cat was mentioned... if it were me and my poem, i'd lose the cat.

[ripple23]

yeah, fuck cats, i never liked em anyway.

[KittenX]

Glorious...thanks enjoyed.

[EternalHunter]

*sigh* As always, beautiful, intuitive, innovative,extraordinary.

[sylvanlightning]

I love the last stanza the best.
The whole poem was great,
as to be expected from you.

Love travels the distances,
yet sometimes we are sad
feeling the absence between us.

:(