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Major Peacenik
08-19-2005, 09:47 PM
while walking
home from work
I stopped at the intersection
and pressed the 'walk' button

you were biking
home from work
earphones in place
riding towards the
intersection
where I stood
on the other side
of the street

"Devin!" I shouted,
smiling

You looked
I waved
You waved
You kept biking.
What gives?

TrippinBTM
08-19-2005, 11:36 PM
we're all wrapped up in our own little worlds, aren't we? Good poem, makes you think...because even the narrator was in her world, with her expectations....

deeper than it might appear at first read. Good poem :)