Water Walking

[TrippinBTM]

Water Walking

What is a human
but water's way of running uphill?
A shortcut for the downward dragged.
The hill walker, mountain-climber
the embodied ocean's sacred ascention;
the aspiring salt-sea of our cells
upward drifting from the forlorn valleys
that languish in the fogs and hazes of night.
We journey to the sun and sky;
for views from the top of the world.

We are the walking ocean
released from the selfish grasp of gravity
We are the falling river reversed
free to wander, and wonder at the world.

[EternalHunter]

"What is a human
but water's way of running uphill?"

I really like your ideas. This is a wonderful poem!

[TrippinBTM]

Thanks, I appreciate it. :)

[nitemarehippygirl]

wow, dude..... i absolutely loved that.

the ocean-as-human, fulfilling its desire to MOVE UP, wow...
awesome thoughts trippinbtm.

why are you in detroit? i want to hang out with you!! lol...... :p :D

[tommyboy487]

:)... interesting

[TrippinBTM]

why are you in detroit?
I ask myself that daily, and yet have no answer. This place is an armpit (even though I'm in the suburbs...even worse, bleh). Anyways, thanks for your comments, you too tommyboy :)

[TheLizardKingMike]

That was nice. Very good pictures. Keep on writing, man. You have good ideas.