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Pirate Hippie
08-18-2005, 10:06 AM
dark circles,
containing all that matters

a shade of forrest,
that all but flatters

the brown of trees,
held by all of these

holes that lead in,
down holes, where no man goes

these eyes that miss the rain,
living in the desert and waiting in vain

they look up, and see the sky,
with it's wafting clouds of white,

and know that they will make it, whatever the spite.

Lozi
08-19-2005, 07:39 PM
:) nice piece dude. i'll read your others...

solaris
09-02-2005, 05:51 AM
It needs something. Try make it longer. I would like to hear more.