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Digger168
08-17-2005, 04:46 AM
Ignoble, the pre death hack of the potbellied man
hangs in the air like a perverse exclamation.

His almost unrealistic body hangs from his frame
like loose shards of flesh from an elephant, the
death rattle startles me because when I look into
his eyes, I can see he knows his death is comming
soon.

I can also see he does not care.

I see myself.

EternalHunter
08-17-2005, 01:37 PM
Nice mirroring effect. The first stanza is alot of fun.