San Pedro Princess

[Gregonzo]

I wrote this a few months ago and renamed it...Cheers,


There is a bright white star
It seems so near that I could reach it
And if i did what would it teach me
What I really want to know
Am I prepared to let go


There is a figure in my dream
It seems so real I want to be it
I'll watch it dance in green and gold
Then I'll catch it when it slows


There is an ocean in her mind
It seems so deep and dark I'll find It
I'll sink till wonderful shadows grow
And bask in its basin of turqouise glow


There is a girl in my heart
Her love so sweet that I can taste it
I'll close my eyes so not to waste it
receiving all that she will show
The star her secret,
The ocean her soul,

[EternalHunter]

"I'll watch it dance in green and gold
Then I'll catch it when it slows"

Your words could almost be a song. :)

[sylvanlightning]

The star her secret,
The ocean her soul,

Oh, how beautiful.

[Gregonzo]

thank you.

[tommyboy487]

beautiful colours

[Gregonzo]

well, I have an assortment of finnished musical works that are w/ out lyrics.

So I may weave this poem into something.

Cheers*

[monarch]

mm yes, its simple, but nice =)

[Gregonzo]

Sometimes the most effective art is Simple in content.

thank you

[mariecstasy]

i loved the whole last stanza...
very pure

[Gregonzo]

I thought that would tye the last stanza up

Cheers