On a dark starry night

[Manolao]

....on a dark starry night I started breathing you... desiring you....
longing for a little caress of you...

on a dark starry night
my heart slipped downhill
no breakes for an aid

on a dark starry night
celestial angels begun to sing
the most precious melody of Love..

on a dark starry night
my dreams came to Earth
and me to Heaven


I'm Italian and of course my english is really poor for poetry...
and I also feel many discrepancies in rhythm and metric of this poem...

but it's just was I am feeling right now for a wonderful angel from moscow I felt in Love at first sight...

and I want to remember the night we met in this way...

Kisses to all the Loving Souls!!!!

[sylvanlightning]

on a dark starry night
celestial angels begun to sing
the most precious melody of Love..


Bella, Prego.



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[Manolao]

ohh, thanks dude! :)

grazie

[TrippinBTM]

I think you did a fine job capturing the moment. The last stanza was my favorite. I love that feeling :)

[Cold_Phusion85]

gotta love how people start off their stories in like an action word. On a dark scary night

See it gets you to read more.

[Casperthesheet]

Good stuff!

[Manolao]

thx friends.... the lovely person whom this poem is dedicates appreciated it as well... defining it "fascinating song of our souls" eehh...

LOVE is so amazing.... :D