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ripple23
08-15-2005, 10:21 PM
the thought of a storm grazes your shoulder
light and feathered
your laugh more often taken
by the cold's heavy hands
how many windows did i lose under your walk
sculpted by shaking
a desert reforming under the sun
your pockets are sand filled
horses track dust into your mouth

a woman is speaking of her garden at Cartegena
her voice is dusk, grey and sober
offering a name to cities
demanding the feet of the moon

trekker
08-15-2005, 10:25 PM
Wow, that's really good.

EternalHunter
08-16-2005, 12:49 AM
Beautiful, delicate images.

ripple23
08-16-2005, 11:21 PM
Beautiful, delicate images.
thanks! one could say the same thing about your writing