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fulmah
07-15-2005, 04:47 PM
we kissed under concrete,
beside aquamarine set,
glass walls enclosing alive beyond,
camera capturing ecstatic embrace
and evident bond.

we rose, helium based,
our careless airborne bodies
cruising lunar caliber,
exchanging history
above cloud point
in flawless orbit.

and you were so catalyst,
eyes eclipsed black in midsummer sun,
perfection an angelic tint
embossed across your brow,
and your starlit silhouette
cast against the sky
was visible to the naked eye…
it wasn’t imagination:

that fission vow’s truth
and your crooked ruby smile
could play clustered in the ink,
so here we are, synched to solar phase,
on a quilt behind the coffee house
drinking milky ways.

joker
07-15-2005, 08:57 PM
This reminds me of a sacred moment with a special girl. I like it.

osiris
07-16-2005, 01:37 AM
"If the Milky Way were not within me how should I have seen it or known it?"
Kahlil Gibran, Sand and Foam

KittenX
07-16-2005, 05:09 AM
The old made new...this is why I love reading your stuff. Energizes me. Esp. last stanza is a wowieee. Cheers!

EternalHunter
07-16-2005, 05:32 AM
The celestial breezes of those moments...:)

sylvanlightning
07-16-2005, 05:37 AM
'and you were so catalyst,
eyes eclipsed black in midsummer sun'

you are a wonder my friend,
always a joy to feel your vibes

Major Peacenik
07-16-2005, 05:44 PM
jesus yer good

Rafaela
07-16-2005, 08:06 PM
i loved it. it captured me for that instant/

steffan
07-16-2005, 10:15 PM
expecialy liked that second stanza

gdhmomchild
07-18-2005, 03:43 AM
and you were so catalyst,
eyes eclipsed black in midsummer sun,
perfection an angelic tint
embossed across your brow,
and your starlit silhouette
cast against the sky
was visible to the naked eye…
it wasn’t imagination:

TY~ Always a huge pleasure to peruse what you have written.