Your treasure

[Laura-the-flowergirl]

Please don't laugh at me if there are many mistakes in this poem, but I'm from Belgium and I mostly write in Dutch. So my English is probably not very excellent...

YOUR TREASURE

Walk into the woods
in between the trees
Just walk on to the lake
and listen to the bees
They'll guide you to a room,
a map lies on the floor.
You know where to look,
but what are you looking for?

[citrus_seas]

very cool. it really gives you a sense of nature and i love the ending! Very groovy, very far out.

[Laura-the-flowergirl]

thank you very much! :)

[Daniel Herring]

It flows. I like it.

[gdhmomchild]

Well done. Short but very nice.

a map lies on the floor.
You know where to look,
but what are you looking for?

[Laura-the-flowergirl]

thank you :)