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Lozi
07-13-2005, 09:31 PM
Taut, angora coat
in an obsolete manner,
with the buttons done up.
There the woman in the nude:
lonesome, cold and dirty-
by the street she curls alone,
the only sheets she has are torn.

Why, every saddened brick wall
streaked with benign terror!
muck.
Terrible sunshine, burning through her:
the woman in the nude.

Risk-taking, a wond'rous thing,
twice she begs today
her lazy time she dies alone inside
within the hos-spittle:
institute-confined.
Cafffeinated dddread ahead she saw a light
softer than the toxic gore of rays she saw,
instead her lengthened back
no longer humped
but tall, towards the glow she walked,
defined by shiny trees,
beside the corridor of amphetamines/or morphine-
who can tell?/

...a sudden wind blows down her rail thin beat,
the seat of a train taking her back back back,
she wakes.
Her dreams: an end to mind forg'd manacles.

shaba
07-13-2005, 09:44 PM
Lozi that was brilliant!


Cafffeinated dddread ahead she saw a light
softer than the toxic gore of rays she saw,
instead her lengthened back
no longer humped
but tall, towards the glow she walked,

I loved these lines :)


I can hear the music in the words, you should make it a song.

Lozi
07-13-2005, 09:50 PM
yo thanks shabshab dude:p yeah it does soimd kinda lyric-like. i'm not so good at song writing...but i'll ask jaz delorean or some other amazing song writer friend:)

*electrica*
07-13-2005, 11:01 PM
You blow my mind.