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*electrica*
07-13-2005, 07:53 AM
I'm very excited because I've been completely unable to write anything for two months. I also love it when you set out to write one thing and it turns itself into something completely different, as this did.


You have no love to give, it's been five years lost to
That girl, that girl, that bitch who broke your stare.
Did you hear pleas for attention when I asked for humanity?
The company's not cold when it's not even there.

I accepted the issues and you repaid me in anger
When my weak knees buckled under your weight.
When your instability became my instability
Your cattiness screamed that I'm five years too late.

Where were you when my cells rebelled in cancer,
When I was tortured and sad and barely there?
How many guesses does it take to get this right?
The company's not cold when it's not even there.

I don't need a boy who's afraid of me,
Afraid of what I might say, of the ages that I'll wait.
Through the unconditional fun and the kitty ears
Your cattiness screamed that I'm five years too late.

Lozi
07-13-2005, 06:04 PM
this a good piece electrica...i haven't been able to write for a while...but came out with a similarly unexpected piece today! is this one based on a truthful experience?

*electrica*
07-13-2005, 09:15 PM
Thanks Lozi. Yes this is very much true. It's about an asshole boyfriend who not only didn't visit me after surgery, he waited nine days to even call. Argh. http://www.hipforums.com/forums/images/smilies/smile.gif

Lozi
07-13-2005, 09:24 PM
grr what a moof!