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bedlam
07-10-2005, 06:32 AM
Laying there alone
silence in the room
surrounding noise deafening
the rain is pelting down.

Where did the sun
suddenly run away to,
has it fallen
from grace with you?

Patterns in the sand
of where we went
now go in circles
surrounding my head.

Words were whispered
close to you
sharing secrets honestly
from a heart that bled.

Droplets now are falling
as clouds loom, overhead
drowning in the sadness
of what was really said.

Where did the sun hide
it was here, inside me
shining like a beacon
it was my only guide.

Patterns in the sand
turn to swollen streams
finally engulfing me
drowning within my head.

Shampoo
07-10-2005, 06:58 AM
this is a very motivating poem, i love it

SLammon420
07-11-2005, 09:01 AM
nice poem...oh and shampoo...how did you come up with your name...shampoo?

HippieAngelMom
07-13-2005, 05:56 AM
wow, good one

*electrica*
07-13-2005, 08:20 AM
I love it.