To you or to me, is there one that can help me

[Icurus]

And I touched the hearts of many,
with little effort I swore a pact, with one, or any,
to attempt the venture to show that your not alone,
or maybe, and more honest to myself, or to myself show
it's me, that all things I've wrote, that all I've said, to me,
I my self I needed to have shown, that it was me all along,
that was not alone.......

Peace Writer's,
Devon Knight ~

[KittenX]

Good idea, interesting message but with some awkward wording or maybe too wordy in some places where it could have been pared down.

[*electrica*]

I personally love the awkward wordiness. I thought that was the point. I really like poetry that's just fun to say, and this one definitely is. It's a beautiful message too. Maybe I'm just sleepy, or maybe this is going to be one of my favourite poems.

[Icurus]

I personally love the awkward wordiness. I thought that was the point. I really like poetry that's just fun to say, and this one definitely is. It's a beautiful message too. Maybe I'm just sleepy, or maybe this is going to be one of my favourite poems.
Thank you both very much,
I can get caught up some times, and
some may say I ramble, but this was
what it was, "It is what it is", as all my
posts are, I miss a lot of thee older writers
that use to frequent the forum, and a lot of
them inspired me, I miss saying hi, I miss them
saying "hi" to me, so I felt alone, it's not like a number
you can call them up and verbalize the fore mentioned.
So, it was in this I was saying it was all my friends that
still!, not present, they still inspired me, they inspired me
to realize I was alone!.......

Peace,
Devon Knight ~

[osiris]

Yes, Devon, it is often indeed that we find that we write as much for our own future understanding as for the sake of presently sharing or impressing others. We are, in this sense, our own oracles. I clink now my beer to the screen and say:

Cheers to Devon!

[Icurus]

Yes, Devon, it is often indeed that we find that we write as much for our own future understanding as for the sake of presently sharing or impressing others. We are, in this sense, our own oracles. I clink now my beer to the screen and say:

Cheers to Devon!
Hey Osiris,
First!, thanks for letting me know the URL (Yours) was
correct.
What kind of beer?.......... ") Just seeing where
I stand in the scheam(sp?) of things...
Thanks for coming around, always a pleasure to hear
from you, your one of few that seem to grasp my meaning
in most my words, and your replies seem to carry the same
flow, for lack of a better word.
I crashed around 1am, up at 2am, and sat thru "The Door's"
and watched the sun come up, I recommend the flick highly,


"Out here in the perimeter there are no stars, out
here, we is stoned imaculate" J. Morrr.

Now pop a fresh one and kick! Later Rommi,
Devon Knight ~

[osiris]

Tecate. Mexican for: Better than American Beer. lol.

[Icurus]

Tecate. Mexican for: Better than American Beer. lol.
I spent a week in Ensanada, Mx. and although we, me and
4 friends brought with us, 10 cases of Budwieser, we went
thru that all to quick, and it was "Tecate" for like three days,
on the last night there, I was up all night selling BBbuuiiccckkssss's (Buick's)
in the john, LOL.
But if you like it, then I'll concider it a compliment!
Peace my brother.......
Dev ~

[sylvanlightning]

I'll offer a toast with my bottle of Guinness,
to your heartfelt post, brother Devon.

[gdhmomchild]

*tips her summer ale in y'all's direction*
Much enjoyed the read and we are all alone but not. ~*cheers!*~