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Silent_concubine
06-14-2004, 07:40 AM
subsequence
chaotic
bliss
painfully sour
is your kiss
your lips
aimlessly
seeking mine
but, my wandering mouth
you are denied

saffronfrancisburnet
06-14-2004, 04:10 PM
i love the words

painfully sour

life how sour it can feel sometimes

great words

love npeace

from saff

Moonjava
06-14-2004, 04:16 PM
Wow, sweetie! You have such a way with words! Short, yet so powerful. Bravo!

Peace,
Moonjava

Silent_concubine
06-14-2004, 09:39 PM
Wow, sweetie! You have such a way with words! Short, yet so powerful. Bravo!

Peace,
Moonjava
Why, thank you. Most of this stuff I'm posting... Is stuff that I've written over a course of 7 years. I do believe I have over 200 poems in my vault. :)