security of new

[pinksugar]

i'm no where to be found
so don't look for me
even i don't know where i am
the smell of your sheets
the still air in your room
nothing is mine
yet I feel like i'm home
crying inside for somewhere to go
driving no where, with no where to go
where did i start?
where did i turn?
how did i get here?
i don't really care
i'm leaving with my empty head
empty hands, empty goals
seeds i plant inside will grow-i'm sure of that
and he won't be there to pick them off
cause he's not here in this room
i'm all alone with your music
slatted sunlight on my eyelids warms my thoughts
your touch still lingers on my skin
the security of your newness
you haven't hurt me yet.....

[Moonjava]

I really liked this. You use beautiful imagery. Aren't things so simple and great when they're new?
Peace,
Moonjava

[Fierce_Flawless]

i'm no where to be found
so don't look for me
even i don't know where i am
the smell of your sheets
the still air in your room
nothing is mine
yet I feel like i'm home
crying inside for somewhere to go
driving no where, with no where to go
where did i start?
where did i turn?
how did i get here?
i don't really care
i'm leaving with my empty head
empty hands, empty goals
seeds i plant inside will grow-i'm sure of that
and he won't be there to pick them off
cause he's not here in this room
i'm all alone with your music
slatted sunlight on my eyelids warms my thoughts
your touch still lingers on my skin
the security of your newness
you haven't hurt me yet.....
i feel like i have been broken down inbetween these lines... the feeling behind them is threatening to break through every pause to breathe... this is so far beyond anything i've read from anyone on here... the expression is so... undeniable. this could have been written by or for anyone in the sense that anyone can relate, but the metaphors... they were manifested by some kind of higher soul...