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pinksugar
06-13-2004, 04:42 AM
do you have to look at me like that?....

with your eyes

your lack of necessity for me

i envy your detachment



i thought i saw your fire

just then

i yearn to be burnt again



i'm not your enemy

open your cell

let down your guard

i can be your salvation



but i fear you're blind to your own self-constructed walls

you can't see my hands

reaching out to grasp at the tips of your windowsills

trying to get inside



i'm just another passerby to you....

why can't you see more?

why can't you see my fire?

i could open your eyes.



i hang around

to see your release

but i'm not sure if i can hang out here much longer








if you'd only let me....



i could give you more.

Moonjava
06-13-2004, 05:20 AM
I've definitely been there. Bravo!
Peace,
Moonjava

Fierce_Flawless
06-13-2004, 11:00 PM
this is exactly what i wanted to write a few days ago. thanks for getting that off my chest for me, in a way i never could have equated... beautiful.