Saturday Worship

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Joshua Tree, Oct 3, 2014.

  1. Joshua Tree

    Joshua Tree Remain In Light

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    This is a poem I wrote a few years ago about consumerism and have just dug up again...


    Saturday Worship

    The Temple doors opened
    And the congregation came in.
    With due deference
    They wiped their feet first.

    In a fit of ecstasy
    A woman forgot her donation
    But the Temple guards settled her
    With starry helmets.

    A man fell to his knees,
    Overcome.
    A cleric ministered to him
    And renewed his Faith.

    The children were all wonder
    Filled with magic to the brim.
    They were eyes
    Only eyes.

    A worshiper grew a daze,
    Unsure of the true path.
    With kindness
    Another showed the way.

    The angelus rang
    And faces turned shadows.
    Some left in sorrow,
    Others coveted sacred gifts.
     
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    aesthetic Z

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    A reminder of religion's beauty, I really like this.
    Are you catholic?
     
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    aesthetic Z

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    Im an idiot.
     

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