Continue it in the journal section. Skip or some moderator might be able to move what you've written into that section. Good story. My mother lived in that very alley you mentioned in Mission Beach about 1/2 a block from the old roller coaster,in 1945. As far as the window pane you mentioned---yeah--I remember it well. Sometimes to the tune of 3 whole hits at a time.
I'm continuing the book @ http://www.politicalforum.com/off-topic-chat/237446-my-book-child-republican-4.html
Don't bother going to the politicalforum, they closed me down. Said it was spam, Sheesh. Just too many right-wing fascists these days.