i got a poem for the media

Discussion in 'The Media' started by 251legalize, Jul 21, 2009.

  1. 251legalize

    251legalize Member

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    the media
    it gets you all sorts of fucked up
    putting illusions intrussions mass confussions around you
    your minds in a prison now
    they've fucked you

    hey
    hey now your mind has been broken
    here is an idea
    a little token
    a little tip if you do our work
    while we sit back wack off and jerk

    cause it is all just a pyramid scheme
    a rotten nest
    people who cant smell their own shit
    this is a cliche mess

    why cant you wake up
    fucking wake up
    stop fooling yourself into thinking of false entities
    inside of words and enemies
    rip your heads out if you care about correcting things
    like saying something is vulgar
    you cant even smell the tension that is instilled more alive then the lies you live and make your will
     
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  2. Driftwood Gypsy

    Driftwood Gypsy Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    its ok I guess, seems rushed. Would be nice if it had some sort of rhythm to it, doesn't have to rhyme, but it seems so jumpy and forced.
     
  3. newcarscent7

    newcarscent7 Member

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    yea that explains it exactly...
    kind of reminds me of American Idiot...
     
  4. Sweetleaf63

    Sweetleaf63 Senior Member

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    I love the frustration;)


    ''why cant you wake up
    fucking wake up
    stop fooling yourself into thinking of false entities
    inside of words and enemies
    rip your heads out if you care about correcting things
    like saying something is vulgar
    you cant even smell the tension that is instilled more alive then the lies you live and make your will''

    FOR SOCIETY THIS HAS TO BE FOR..
     
  5. Dude111

    Dude111 An Awesome Dude HipForums Supporter

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    Indeed..... YOU NEED A STRONG/AWARE MIND not to be taken in by them!!


    AN EXCELLENT POEM!!
     

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