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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rambleON, Apr 3, 2009.

  1. rambleON

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    radius of romance. a quantifying reality of empirical dance.
    qualifying genius virtuosity in harmonic trance. exposures of aristocratic enclosures forecloses authors in squirrel manure. brochure of loves grandeur is an unsure tenure.

    romance's temperature radius echos the kalvin scale in summer solstice. actless act of activation. actress arrows rival cupids areo-aviation.

    live. don't regret. easy bet; push reset.
    easy bet unrest. civic invest. meant regretful pretest.

    a last full measure in circumference signals red blood in valentine preference. upholding european ordnance for the rest. pass or fail test. nod yes or no or protest.

    timid is the blinded. inferiority not minded. haphazardly discounted.
    mimicry blindsides those who go worldwide. superiority magnified.

    rule of thumb, march out-of-step to your defiant drum. sharks will come. chum the venom...line the path with a lesser taken cadence. radiance of absence. flagrance of credence. not clear water revival, but truth in actual.

    romance of the seven dynasties.
    dynasties of the seven romances.

    clash boundaries for a love.
    white laundries score a flying dove.

    lately linda lets loose lonely loving loathings.
    lately linda lets loose lonely loving loathings.

    mental gymnasium.
     
  2. rambleON

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    hi, rye, sigma phi. lie, stye, pig, little gets bye. eat, meat sit and greet. shit,
    fit and oven mitts. bits, nasty hits on big nitwits.

    word play today, doday. thinking, no compromises for
    surprises. truth, absolutley. in all things babe ruth. hockey not baseball, but
    information over all. need for answers, speed for dancers, apples for newton.
    pop-culture for dummies and egypt is for mummies.

    material, kellogs cereal. abstract reasoning, cookie cutter
    seasoning. to be , to see, even to pee. free. hunger for more-musical-scores-household chores. marshmallow smores. monique, antique. laughing when its not funny. giving; not reciving money. spur of the moment for flock of the feather

    ...leave for interesting weather.
     
  3. rambleON

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    sleeping. not really. really just speaking.
    yes, a mental riot seeking. apple candy dandruff house keeping.

    thinking. what was spoken is like a chucky cheese token. redeem
    for a lesser prize currently broken.

    seamstress sally hozen. ok good night, are you dozing.
     
  4. rambleON

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    can i be the best. test. rest. bingo jump fest.

    can i swim. sink. kim's pink stink.

    what does it mean, when youre seen. ten times. over yen. yin. yang. constant gangster slang. chinese chin. siamese twins. rolls.

    vietnam voting polls. wax on boating woes.

    mediocre metaphors. combat troops and fruit loops. too many, already taken. what came up has already been baking. oven.

    summon. teeter totter hand me ups. feeder potter and hes down.

    harry held harold haphazardly high.
    teddy tied tommy tenaciously tight.
    eddie eat elephants enormously elegant.
    brenda bit betina brashly below.
     
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    bpm. brilliant bipolar mind. tnerllirb ralopib dnim.
    mpb. manic person before. cinam nosrep erofob.

    cne. carbon negates environment. nobrac setagen tnemnorivne.
    enc. ecological nightmare coming. lacigoloce eramthgin gnimoc.

    nst. national syndicated trauma. lanoitan detacidnys amuart.
    tsn. theories spell nothing. seiroeht lleps gnihton.

    lda. lower distant aggression. rewol tnatsid noissergga.
    adl. attack defiant lands. kcatta tnaifed sdnal.

    rtn. repeat this nonsense. taeper siht esnesnon.
    ntr. need tenacious revolution. deen suoicanet noitulover.


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  6. rambleON

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    testament to friendly amusement
    bros, parker for amateur barkers, bob

    drew carry me on
    dew barley dawns

    Bambi had her fawns
    shot dead by professional pawns

    what does music do for you. for the klu. klux klan can understand too.
    how does music move you through. this life. true, sometimes life a hot knife.

    butter. sticked medium. twixt peanut oil sodium. rum. heart burn on tums.

    how can i see. trail mix cocktail on wounded knee. there is when.
    see how i can. tirade, french whored maid. constantly in a braid. band aid.

    what is it. band named misfits in over sized mosh pits. made its make.
    stake your take. dade. county. undersized escapades. it is what. but.

    media cultures. increased flying saucers. dizzy society fed like vultures.

    stig.stag.nig.nag.
    jig.jive.cattle-polte dive.

    spiral life.
    splife royale.

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    Mozart's metaphysical musical mission mostly might make masses mistake melancholy-matted mainstream munich mittens...maybe.

    nightly napoleon's nasty national naval nuts normally never navigate near nautical nonsense; nor near notorious nazi networks not named neatly.
     
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    ''that's a definite possibility'' ed said.

    ''what is'' said ted.

    ''nothing major. but it's an open secret that you're clearly confused'' ed
    said to ted.

    ''good grief, you butt head'' said ted.



    ''oxymoron'' red said to ted.

    ''what is'' said ted.

    ''nothing ted, you clever fool'' red said.

    ''almost exactly, old news'' ed said to both ted and red.

    ''well, im hopelessly optimistic in my mandatory opinion'' said ted.



    ''we all need the advance basics to this friendly argument or extra time'' ed
    said.


    ''what'' fred said.

    ''whos fred'' said red, ted and ed to fred.

    ''what'' fred said again.
    --------------------------------------------------------------------
    there was a deafening silence as ed, ted and red left fred in
    the industrial park.



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  9. rambleON

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    post 1000. 10 x 100 = 1000.
    browsing. the time line, in line. over land mines.

    1000 post. 10,000 x 0.10 = 1000
    different angles. Cincinnati bangles. under the law. subpoena jingo jangles.

    1000 x y/p = future estimation.
    equations. equal prediction. bet that ill be in your jurisdiction. currently.
    subserviently, gerrymandered the boundaries. sally sews sunday sundries.

    five times fast. ship masts. copy kat blast. sally sews sunday sundries.
    say that. hive dime pasts. five times fast.

    1000 post, sail out.
    1000 more, sell out.
     
  10. rambleON

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    organ's two apples. they drink fruit snaples. pussy-fide. a nullified state in low constant debate.

    from b's to gents. we drink liquor ingredients. bonifide. electrofide in high dominate. predominate and communicate. feel us be irate.

    gather around team. no need to scream. junk fein, naw mean. like a lock smith to a chasity recital we hold the title; welter weight belt. key copy smelt-ers.

    that be our game. one life to kick, die by the ball, live by the ball. fall. colors. red. represent blood...kick home run anti duds.

    like the 'she' to their name. our opponents feed rodents cotton candy deodorant.

    gather around team. we be the favorites. in every event. circumvent. hyper hell bound bent. that's our motto.

    in short, team. we be clean like jesus is the reason for the season. we are the catalyst to kick ball theorist.

    kick ball life, play a beat. tns. from the bong hit track daddy mack. truck.
     
  11. rambleON

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    nacy grace. a shape shifter in commonplace. carpeted marketed air-waved chase. no needs to need. no news to bleed. heated take heed. dilated anomaly. refurbished truths normally. what is news, news-mother? in unbiased tehcno color. please. for streamlining ease.

    in deadwood, mining monies. jane, calamity cursed hannity & colmes. sean, combs. ultra ego magnifies his dank trichomes. wild bill hickok would take up sheriff. setting up nightly new news tariffs. al swearengen acts as bailiff; for his deadwood bar shananagins.

    fox, cnn, msnbc. all live fed most earnestly. all feed live parasitically. off your subscribed hannity annuities. and divided grace, nancy addicted fancies. tickle your own elmo. drop new anchor elbows. randomly.


    cotton candy sweet as most half-truths sold...let me see that correct news reel mold.

    now, roll playa, roll...now dip, playa dip.
    now, know, playa, know...now trip, playa, trip. to that worthy news demanding script.


    hahah, yeeyeeah playa. roll the nightly news script, edited satisfactory to meet demands of free thinking conscript-conquistadors.
     
  12. rambleON

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    nature is furious at her children's dance. rhythmic troubles silence her recapitulation treble trance. nostalgia fades the past back in black, panic jades the future fact into culdesacs. we unknowingly knew but willingly went through...our earth mothers spoken rules.

    if earth mother played us music how would we dance.
    if earth mother spoke to us how would we listen.
    if earth mother wanted us to act how would we behave.

    earth mother came in a dream. three stages of vision, each ending in human collision. past; of present peace. present; of past feast. future; past apocalyptic beasts present coming unease. earth mother continues to function, in full inquisition of her nurturing position.

    grandfather came in a dream. he said earth mother has been betrayed. today, mother bleeds from a wound to her back. music of earth mother. draws you in. mother earth of music. draws you out. grandfather says listen to harmony, a developmental stanza balancing unanimously, our noisy minority.

    if she composes the harmony of nature. our ears tune out.
    if she reads to us the language of existence. we do not translate.
    if she directs the delivery of conduct. we have attitude.

    ancestors came in a dream. suddenly, humbly what wounded knee now means. what does what mean, as grandfather bows to father accordingly. earth mother's feathers hang in diligent tethers. tar in mothers feathers, as sobs tear up daughter's weather-or-not in one hundred-point font.


    earth mother bleeds.
     
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    Oh my. I need to read this story again tomorrow after sleeping on it, and then maybe I can grasp some of the meaning within.

    Or perhaps there is no feeling herein? Or may it lay in the way we say these words today that holds bay these feelings of doubt for insightful bouts that a night of rest may have the best of my poetic hest? So henceforth, In the moment i live, in forgetfulness of past and presentness, as reluctant retorts prove evident?
     
  14. rambleON

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    nope, no feeling within. just a smart ass anecdote.

    haha, i feel like that's true.
     
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    urijah faber's valor is to cowardly neighbors as jedi knights are to mind-trickin with life savors. reminiscent of tenacity, our savor. mental design tailors, bio-mechanical love of labors.

    liquidity, the expendable around-the-belt saber.
    audacity, the marginal force that merits no favors.

    running top speed without bending my knees. seen without eyes discounting spectator fees. head to toe. ready to throw. down. punches fueled by triple crown.

    intelligent hare and the dubious turtle. irrelevant pair and the obvious curdle. of blood. octave notation sounds a conclave staff blunting perfect pitch. convex snitch stone. octagon victory prone.

    in capable formality. upside-down normalities. abundant anomalies.
    random aggression translates guided progression. triangulate the food chain, strangulate protagonist pain.

    pigmented skin toner. fore sale buy owner. rent to own bills. pop fish oil pills. honest exhaustion hauls, stimulating inner neanderthals.

    liquidity, placebo study oils gears.
    audacity, gears oil placebo study.
     
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    Please read and comment on my poems! I'm just beginning an I need some constructive criticism.

    Your poems are really confusing and yet at the same time they're artsy and kinda beautiful
     
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    confusing yes. that's the way they turn out as i decline to put structure or significant meaning to these poems. though some have some feeling behind them.

    artful and beautiful is what i wanted. thanks.
     
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    colors, brothers and cinnamon dread-locked mothers.
    anti, this. your intellect is bliss. above all you crawl. forget the whole, dwell like the troll...bridge, under.

    fort sumter. wars. common knowledge whores. pimples, dimples, chimpanzee ripples and crazy swirls of lavender trifles. plated. all ready stated. too many ideas all ready tainted. created, debated, overrated and simply eviscerated.

    throttle. boots up, laces down on water bottles.

    bet, tibet. forget the alphabet.

    stun. dont run. stand, demand.

    live.let.outlet for the onset.
    let.live.onset for the outlet.
     
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    yo, yo now check dis shit. drop it...


    unintelligible wisdom. indian plains chiefdom. blossoms on native flower's regional anthem. random thoughts mirror an inner prism. random thoughts on ramble's thread, randomly pick up sticks while you sleep in bed. phantom freaks bounty garlic geaks...plain-jane-hippie speak is cheap.

    gonna drop a few lines about the random thoughts personnel.

    no browine points to award. penny drops in zen arcade playing swords.
    im there too, not asking for acceptance, just an outlet for my creative ineptness...

    aristartale, going full throttle, monkey see monkey dew point water bottles. chick be bbad. unlike her, he be fanatical in searching. shut down enron while only surfing. the web, nightly spider in ebb and flow.

    grow, green thumb on mixing pot row. this be topnotchstoner. top chef, the stoners lounge owner. mitigating the magistrate bonners. stressed the court for time, half out of limes. gonna slam a few anyways on your dime.

    hear that chirping chime. pressed rat's fact checking is fine. uncover the plots of the assigns creed, giving rt information in defiant need. blessed be to listen. chicken, cross the road...surpassed a toad? rat on press, debunk the centerfold...

    bought and sold. prediction untold, truth of cylinder scaffold. four reasons, spice and seasons. tree-hugger doesn't need treason, to dislike. like riding a bike. you never forget, how to carve out a heart. with a spoon and DNA codons. enter odon, my english obsession. teaching historical lessons. Chinese titty twister sessions. hurts like giaf.

    piaf, a symmetrical beauty rivals european metrical busy. thee stunned. bee stung. in the hive blocking squirrelly constipation.

    constellations cross cirss the sphere of prospective. orion hunts the night in focused objectives. noting gets by orison, in acorns we trust. in nuts we must. pack the pounds of his pig flu puss.

    kinky ramone, and the bowling stone. strike the pins...trukey owns.
    harry potter and the sorcerers dog bone. spike the gin...drunk undertones.

    hippiehillbillie and the dili of daft, most honorable people get by feel- freely without witch craft. just toil and growing soil. spoil is the notion, of waking up on the wrong side of the ocean. in mood swing motion...



    edit; no flow is right without being water tight. to hell or hot water. deserving mad respect. nigga plays with lava erector-sets. stooping the cross of coarse, in main dinner course. served nightly. in a link posted lightly. follow and youll be casted brightly. in water.
     
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    forget and forfeit our meditated mind musters. her dedicated time clusters. his too many notes blunders.
    what if you never woke up. suspended animation upside down teeter hang ups. everyone, everything would still ravage, savagely spin. all your memories recycled to your once removed twin.

    live forever. endlessly, helplessly, selflessly.
    triumph for genius, month to month needlessly anti jesus.

    who would you be if you could. someone funny, someone with money. someone intelligent, someone insignificant. power. under thunder showers. a golden age that never was. buzz. anyone who does.

    fine china in a restaurant. how about with the rain man savant.
    who wants to live forever in shakespeare's theater. monitored, contoured in full contact with a empty tailor.

    think of this ability, stability, possibility. take it, shake it and bake it. cook a dream, not in the mean. not average but anything siren. surreal, Galapagos seals. Cuban missile meals. emotions that squeals. angry steals the turquoise teal.
     

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