What do you think of my poem?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by marysoul, Mar 18, 2009.

  1. marysoul

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    We lay on the trampoline,
    exausted,
    full of fear,
    it's dark outside,
    but it's okay,
    'cause you're here.

    We lay real quiet,
    trembling,
    a shiver down my spine,
    you run your finger down my lips,
    and everything is fine.

    I close my eyes,
    and bite my lip,
    and try to disappear,
    i lay there with frustration,
    it won't work when you're near.

    I get all dressed,
    and leave you there,
    to sleep,
    i get up and walk away,
    there's nothing you can keep.
     

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